MY WRITTING

should There Be Rules At Recess

How many students get hurt?

Schools are full of rules to make students safe.

Do you want rules for your school I know I don’t .Firstly:More bullies will come to our school Secondly:You don’t have to listen and you don’t  need to work.  

Less rules at play times would mean less duty time for teaches.Children will be doing what ever they want to which people will be happy .

Children will get smarter and tougher  and make smarter decisions  when they take tough risks

FOR WRITTING WE WERE ASKING IF THEIR SHOULD BE RULES IN RECCES

EYE TEST

WHAT NUMBER CAN YOU SEE

Farm house

CAN YOU SEE WHAT I SEE

Can you see it

The Dream Giver

The Dream Giver

A dark shadow creeping from window to window filling kids heads with magical dreams and they are dreams that inspire the kids to do more he poured the magical potion in the boys and girls shoes .The shoes were filled with a ballerina and the dark shadow poured his position on the little boys book and an astronaut.Then the little boy knocked the dark shadows potion off his bed and astronaut fell back in the book and he jumped into another book and he got trap by a huge giant monster and then the monster chased the astronaut to a cliff and the astronaut thought he was going to die. But then all of a sudden the a dark mysterious shadow came and the shadow started through magic egg that could grow trees and the magic eggs growing a humagest tree over the monster and the monster fell on to it stomach and die and the astronaut watched while the shadow flew away

My Weekend

TITLE :MY WEEKEND

we are learning to write paragraphs .

Planning

1.Getting up

2.Having breakfast

Writing

I woke up and yawned I sat up with a smile on my face I hoped off the bed and went  to the bathroom to wash my eyes and my mum said ‘hi son’ .‘Hi mum’ I said I walked into my room and lied back down on my bed I waited for someone to call out to me .Then I got changed into some nice clothes  then I went to the kitchen.

I went out to the kitchen and made me eggs on toast and some weetbix and i walk out of the kitchen and washed my hands and my mouth

Marking

Ideas	Points	Comment
	2	simple ideas not much detail about them.
miss baker	2	some simple ideas but not much detail about them.

KAWA OF CARE

BEING RESPONSIBLE IN THE HALL

fI i love this

Reading

we are learning to find information in our story

My maths is awsome

WHATCH IT

MY TURTLE POEM

turtle He is a shield blocking every hit with his shell He is a colourful turtle swimming in the ocean with the sun shining He is a adventures traveling throw the ocean exploring all the lands He is a tiger seeking for food BY TREMAINE

VALCANO

VOLCANO the volcano erupts it seems to be angry . you can’t mess with it cause it will spit at you. the larva and all the boulders rush down the volcano with lava dripping on them . lava dripping from the sky burning throw the ground rocks shooting from the volcano and scattered into a million pieces .the sky filled with dark and evil clouds that can burn you up and the lightning will kill you and the orange smoke. While the thunder strikes the hot boiling lava melts a passageway to the village to take over all the people and melt their bodies.

MY DREAM CAR

Love this car

Abandoned

It is a haunted house waiting to be opened so it can swallow you hole.

Birds landing on the roof  top like an aeroplane landing to drop its passengers off.The creaky crumbly house is breaking to bites and  the mouldy house shattered to pieces with the white seagulls on top.

Abandoned