My Weekend

TITLE :MY WEEKEND

we are learning to write paragraphs .

Planning

1.Getting up

2.Having breakfast

Writing

I woke up and yawned I sat up with a smile on my face I hoped off the bed and went  to the bathroom to wash my eyes and my mum said ‘hi son’ .‘Hi mum’ I said I walked into my room and lied back down on my bed I waited for someone to call out to me .Then I got changed into some nice clothes  then I went to the kitchen.

I went out to the kitchen and made me eggs on toast and some weetbix and i walk out of the kitchen and washed my hands and my mouth

Marking

Ideas	Points	Comment
	2	simple ideas not much detail about them.
miss baker	2	some simple ideas but not much detail about them.